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If this came through your letterbox

Discussion in 'Photography & The Digital Darkroom' started by supanova, Feb 6, 2011.

  1. supanova

    supanova A3 2.0 TDI SE

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    so this is my flyer for my photography and framing business.....

    would or would you not concider calling me for my services based on recieving this via your letterbox??

    cheers :)


    o plus you get 10% ff yay!!! lol
     
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  3. Broken Byzan

    Broken Byzan Photographic Moderator
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    I don't like the squigly font, it's a bit hard to read IMHO

    What's on the back?
    More samples/Prices perhaps?

    Sorry not being critical, stupid photography degree makes me look too hard sometimes,LOL
     
  4. supanova

    supanova A3 2.0 TDI SE

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    changed the font to something a bit different.

    i still want to keep the whole hand written look to the font.

    and to start with i think im just going to order 1sided flyers.

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  5. Broken Byzan

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    Thats better mate. Much easier to read and still has the hand written look.

    The brides eyeline is also a nice touch as she is looking up at your logo.

    Can you not go halves with someone and get them to pay for the back to be printed? ( just a thought) Something related?
     
  6. paddy

    paddy Audi=No fault code, no idea

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    I like the colour contrast and layout, the lighting is really good, just a shame she couldn't smile on the happiest day of her life ! She has a "here we go again" sort of look about her.
    Just my opinion :)
     
  7. supanova

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    lol the orginal photo of this theres people in the bg and it was taken from far back, it was taken when the priest was ''blah blah blah'n'' and she was probz thinkin wtf is he on about lol!

    this bride was the best bride ive had the opertunity of taking photos for, she was so bubbly and full of jokes lol she even invited me to the honey moon suite to capture their first 'night' together lol but the groom was quick to shoot it down lol!


    cheers for the comments guys and Byzan thats not a bad idea ya know! lol its just something quick and easy im looking for at the moment to post around my local's just to see if this idea would kick off!

    (p.s so you say you have a degree? any snaps you could show me? ) ;)
     
  8. johnnythepie

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    +1.Miserable looking.Apart from that looks good.Dont wish to be rude, but another model might be worth a try, facial shot at a 45 degree angle.Smiling.
     
  9. crazy88

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    Must admit, I agree. A bride photo should be proper smiling i'd have thought.

    I do like it though.
     
  10. Solly

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    Looks good second one is alot better than the first one. :)
     
  11. auroan

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    Needs a happy smilely face in it
     
  12. DaveA3

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    2nd but would be perfect with a lovely smile to go with it.
     
  13. woddle1000

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    I would change the picture or run a filter through it as the woman on the front looks dis-interested
     
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